節(jié)奏很慢的故事。大雨滂沱的天氣,在雨聲里看完。技巧上還可以提升,比如孩子唱歌那段,和Nickie的獨(dú)自徘徊交錯(cuò)閃現(xiàn)更動(dòng)人。但仍然打動(dòng)我??吹竭@樣執(zhí)著的愛(ài)情必然落淚,無(wú)論多么老套。That was the nearest place to the haven,and you were there.是最打動(dòng)我的臺(tái)詞,但關(guān)聯(lián)詞用錯(cuò)了。應(yīng)該是because.